It was so helpful to get a fresh pair of eyes—and very insightful, educated, smart eyes—on my work after I’d been staring at it for so long. I’d reached the point where I couldn’t even tell if it was any good anymore, but Rebecca gave me the confidence to keep going and helped me see what I couldn’t because I was so deep in the weeds. She went above and beyond, giving me way more feedback than I expected. As soon as I read her edit letter, I knew she was right. She’s made my manuscript stronger, and now I feel confident I’ve done all I can to give myself the best shot at a traditional publishing deal. I’m ready to pitch my book to agents!
Liz Green at Green Goose Writing, ghostwriter, novelist, and book coach
Over the last year, I worked with several advisors to refine my agent query letter and synopsis. Their editorial feedback was frustrating. Much of it was filled with jargon, or their suggestions didn’t capture my dual timeline story arc.
Then, I learned about Rebecca Davis. Oh, my goodness, what a difference! Rebecca asked for my entire manuscript, query letter, and synopsis. In less than three weeks, she returned her recommendations for crafting stronger, more compelling materials.
Rebecca’s thorough feedback was insightful, actionable, and understandable. Even more impressive was the effort she put into researching a list of agents. She provided a detailed spreadsheet with information on how to contact the agent and a summary of how my manuscript aligned with each agent’s interests. Talk about helpful!
Our video coaching sessions, where we discussed the process, deliverables, feedback, and next steps, were informative and engaging. As a “graduate” of Rebecca’s Agent Pitch Package, I feel positioned to secure an agent and look forward to the day when I can call Rebecca and share the success she made possible.
Jane P., suspense writer
I wholeheartedly recommend Rebecca Davis as a book coach. Before I found her, I possessed strong faith in my writing but deep insecurity in my ability to attract attention to it. I felt ignorant, lost, out of options in my quest for publication. With concrete ideas, advice, and research, Davis has set me on a path of knowledge and confidence toward success.
Scott Michael Powers, author and freelance writer
Working with Rebecca was exactly what I needed to move forward. Her feedback was incredibly detailed and insightful. She helped me refocus on the core of my story, especially the protagonist’s role and character arc, and gave me a clear path forward on my revision process. It’s a lot to tackle, but breaking it down into smaller tasks feels doable now. I’m confident she’ll be a wonderful book coach for any writer looking for clarity, structure, and smart, thoughtful support.
Jean B., mystery writer