Revision & Feedback

Smart, structured approaches to revising your novel and using feedback to improve your story.

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Turning Margin Notes into a Revision Plan

When I return a manuscript evaluation to a writer, I include a developmental edit on the opening chapters, line by line, alongside the high-level assessment. And every time I hit “send” on that feedback, I get anxious because I know what’s about to happen on the other end. A writer opens that document and sees

You Already Know How She Feels. Does Your Reader?

Sunday night I watched Scott Pelley interview director Christopher Nolan on 60 Minutes about The Odyssey that opens on July 17. At one point Pelley considers the grandiose epic movies and complex storylines Nolan’s known for, and the sheer number of people involved to bring them into reality. The following exchange really stood out to

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How to Read Your Own Manuscript Like an Editor

I have a 112,000-word discovery draft sitting on my desk, and I’ll be honest with you — the thought of revising it is a little terrifying. I know what needs work. That’s not what terrifies me.  I keep asking myself the questions that make any writer spiral: What if there are too many changes? What

Hitting Deadlines for Work? Hit Them for Your Novel, Too.

“Something came up.” “I had to put out a fire.” How many times have you said that as a reason for not getting to your to-do list? If I had a nickel for every time those words have come out of my mouth…  It’s the same for your creative project, too. You know, that writing

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